Okay, ladies and gentlemen...Let's get cooking!
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Thanks to everyone who was able to participate. For those of you who are heavy into A-Z, I'll do another one this summer. :)
Entry .5 (This one came in a little later than the others...sorry about that.)
Title: POSTER OF THE YEARGenre: Picture book
Amy slouched through the door, flinging her books down on the kitchen table. “What’s wrong?” Asked Amy’s mom, taking a tray of cookies out of the oven. “I spilled milk on my jeans at lunch and I didn’t get picked to be the class monitor.” Amy scratched at the milk stain on her pants leg. “Worst of all, there’s a poster contest at school and I can’t think of anything to draw.” “You’ll come up with something.” Mom offered Amy a cookie. “Want a snack?” “No thanks.” Amy shrugged and frowned. “What can I draw for the contest?”
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